My Adventure Book 2

My Adventure Book 2

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My Adventure Book 2

評分:
3.4
上架時間: September 08, 2015
最後更新: September 08, 2015
開發者: J0xFlasher

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故事開始於父母外出時,你因為好奇閣樓裡有什麼而上去查看。你發現了一本書,結果被吸進書裡,冒險就此展開!你的冒險之書!

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honikufe

Sep. 09, 2015

4
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Nice game. It is not very difficult and decent, but has a nice story and is easy to solve in a short time. For this a great 30min game!

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Andyman999

Sep. 08, 2015

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Blue and Green does not make Yellow...

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LeschenkoB

Sep. 08, 2015

1
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Nice game!

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Ruffian_Squee

Sep. 08, 2015

4
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rocket up up: "I need to insert missed part."
This is potentially missing a word. "I need to insert the missing part." or "I need to insert a missing part."

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Ruffian_Squee

Sep. 08, 2015

4
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Part three.

temple left left: "These simbols are consides with elements."
"Symbols" is misspelled and the grammar is incorrect. I would change this to "These symbols coincide with elements."

rocket right: "What is behind this door."
Incorrect punctuation. "What is behind this door?"

rocket right up: "Maybe the metal detector could find anything."
This should be "Maybe the metal detector could find something." or even "Maybe a metal detector could find something."

rocket up: "I need to make anti-gravity."
This is technically correct but is still worded strangely. I would recommend "I need to create anti-gravity." or "I need to fix the ship's anti-gravity."

rocket up up: "I need to insert missed part."
This is potentially mis

J0xFlasher
J0xFlasher 開發者

Thank you very much!