The Dark Road

The reason grammar and spelling is so important is because text is the only thing we have to draw us into the game. A good text adventure can keep you interested without needing any graphics or even any sound. No matter how good your story is, a simple spelling mistake can make it seem ameturish and break any mood you've created. Also, bad grammar can really damage the flow of a paragraph and hinder the building up of tension and/or immersion. That's why.

As for this, aside form it's errors, it was ok.The story barely made sense and there seemed to be no logic to the options, but it wasn't a total loss.

I like choose your own adventure games but the spelling and grammatical errors in this one really detract from the story.

@MarioF, it may be because someone has put in the time and effort to put something together, yet only a little more time and effort would have been good enough to fix the problem.

Concept is great. Very unique having a game that lets the story continue even if you are undead. But it obviously needs A LOT of work. I wouldn't mind this being a text adventure like it is now, but it needs a much better story, pictures, a progress map would be cool, maybe some music, and then you could have an amazing game.

I agree that the spelling and grammar could be improved upon. More than that, though, each option is very hard to click on. If these were rectified the game would still be fairly simple but could be somewhat fun.