Coloring a world

This is a really fun idea. I LOVE the concept. .... that said... One of the cardinal rules of making a game is to not make your players fight the controls. The movement isn't 'quirky'... it's downright impossible to get the hang of quickly enough to want to continue even trying to play. My suggestion is to slow down the run speed (how many times did I go FWOOM! off in the wrong direction...?) and see about getting the character to run and jump more realisticalyl within the world. The 2nd page with the clouds... that was far harder then it should have been :( Then a few pages over, there's one where you're told 'don't fall'... if you fall, you die... despite being only a few feet off the ground. Rediculous... This is a areally COOL idea.. but.. too much of a fight to be fun.

On the screen that warns about erasers, if you jump right along the left side.. the dude gets his head stuck between the wall and the cloud hehe.

A nice concept, but the controls are not very good. You seem to have good ideas for games, but you keep making them on playcrafter and the all have major control issues. I hope you find a better way to turn you ideas into games because they could be fun.

Too many bugs to be enjoyable. Sorry. But it has potential.

really hard to get the hang of the controls; you have to run back and forth to gain momentum to jump? that's kinda weird. kinda fun game though 3/5