My Adventure Book 2

My Adventure Book 2

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My Adventure Book 2

Penarafan:
3.4
Tarikh keluaran: September 08, 2015
Kemas kini terakhir: September 08, 2015
Pembangun: J0xFlasher

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Ia bermula apabila ibu bapa anda tiada di rumah dan anda sangat ingin tahu apa yang ada di loteng. Anda naik ke atas untuk melihat dan ternampak sebuah buku. Buku itu menyedut anda masuk dan di situlah semuanya bermula! Buku Pengembaraan anda!

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honikufe

Sep. 09, 2015

4
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Nice game. It is not very difficult and decent, but has a nice story and is easy to solve in a short time. For this a great 30min game!

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Andyman999

Sep. 08, 2015

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Blue and Green does not make Yellow...

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LeschenkoB

Sep. 08, 2015

1
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Nice game!

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Ruffian_Squee

Sep. 08, 2015

4
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rocket up up: "I need to insert missed part."
This is potentially missing a word. "I need to insert the missing part." or "I need to insert a missing part."

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Ruffian_Squee

Sep. 08, 2015

4
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Part three.

temple left left: "These simbols are consides with elements."
"Symbols" is misspelled and the grammar is incorrect. I would change this to "These symbols coincide with elements."

rocket right: "What is behind this door."
Incorrect punctuation. "What is behind this door?"

rocket right up: "Maybe the metal detector could find anything."
This should be "Maybe the metal detector could find something." or even "Maybe a metal detector could find something."

rocket up: "I need to make anti-gravity."
This is technically correct but is still worded strangely. I would recommend "I need to create anti-gravity." or "I need to fix the ship's anti-gravity."

rocket up up: "I need to insert missed part."
This is potentially mis

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Thank you very much!