Night of Shadows

Talk about a cliffhanger.... I was hoping to find out what/who he was hiding from. Please finish this game, it is worthy of being completed. As far as the script goes, I understand what the developers were trying to accomplish with the dark pages and scribbled writing. It shows the fear and feeling of helplessness of the individual. I like it, but personally I think the script needs to be a little bigger. For instance the phrase "Why didn't she save me" the word "save" is almost illegible.

Reminds me of "Limbo"...

Good game, nice story, just needs a little tweaking.
I can barely read the script (both in the beginning intro and the journal). Try using a brighter white text background for the intro and a bigger, slightly duller color, and easier to read script.
The journal either needs to fade once you move or have a little close-out (X).
It appears you have the script of a jump that is meant to go higher then currently set on the game.
It scared me to death when the boy suddenly grabbed on to the rope and sung across, maybe highlighting the options so you don't give the high-strung people a heart attack. XD
It would be nice to see what the boy is thinking like "I can't get across, (Object) is blocking my path." or something like that.
All in all, It's a great start and I look foward to the full game.

The graphics and sound are beautiful, but it's hard to read, he moves too slowly, and the plot is too linear. It needs more interactivity. I'd like to continue playing, though.

Visually amazing game, plays really smooth, no bugs that I could find either. Only criticism I have is that the pages are a little hard to read.