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SlenderChildren
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SlenderChildren
Tag per SlenderChildren
Descrizione
Slender Children? Pretty cliche sounding for a horror game, right? Well the story behind it all is what intrigues you to play this game.. Have you ever wondered what happened to the children that SlenderMan takes? There is no proof of him actually killing them in any way, people say he makes them sick with "Slender Sickness" and thats about it… Well Imagine yourself as a 10 year old girl that SlenderMan has taken and you waking up in a strange home blocked inside this small room.. Scary right? And you find a missing poster of a child the same age as you.. what a mystery? And all You hear is SlenderMan lurking the halls, and sometimes even have that slight glance of that tall man, better keep hiding from him because he will just hold you captive again.. Your going to have to play it to find out the ending!
1st Level teaser
Come si gioca
Movement: WASD
To make cursor show up on screen: Hold space bar
Movement of objects: Left Mouse Click
Collecting Posters: Left Mouse Click
Pause Menu: Esc Button
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KorynnO
Jan. 09, 2015
All of that being said you have a good start here, I like the idea that you're playing as a child, so really try to get into that. It makes your game stand out more! You have a good start to a house as well which will improve with time, I like the fact that I'm running around a reasonably small space. Another thing I enjoy is the random floating objects that seem to be all around... not sure if that was on purpose but it makes it seem odd. Add more of that! Odd is great!
Keep working on the game, looking forward to an update!
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Hey KorynnO, first off thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback, its what i need to make my game better. And the floating object were not something i meant to do but i had people play it after i posted it on congregate and they said it was a pretty good idea, so thanks i sure will put more of that in :)
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evilwood666
Jan. 10, 2015
It's not bad. Quite atmospheric. I'll just echo the comments already made by Korynn0. Controls need some work, I had no idea what I was supposed to do... found the posters.. got caught by slender man... movement is a little slow.
Hey evilwood666, Thanks :) After Collecting the 10th poster the bedroom down stairs unlocks, and you will save the first slender child. My unlocking door sound after collecting the 10th poster i think is to quiet i will fix that. The movement is slow i think ill notch it up 2 on my speed. Thank so much again.
KorynnO
Jan. 09, 2015
9. I'll make this my last major observation as I've already given you a lot of stuff to think about (sorry). I have played a lot of Slender knock off games, some good, some bad, some in-between and the one thing I've noticed is the goal of the game is to collect all pages and then either die or escape. Try to make your goal unique in some way, add a different sub goal, something to spice it up from the others, try reading stories for inspiration.
After Collecting the 10th poster the bedroom down stairs unlocks, and you will save the first slender child. this is just the 1st level teaser. There will be 6 children you save, and the last one is your little sister. All of these children have "Slender Sickness" And you have to protect them, The on reason you don't have "Slender Sickeness" is because you have this crystal bullet necklace your mom got you and it protects you from that. If you wanna know more on the concept PM me or email me at Cristina_marie17@hotmail.com i would LOVE your feedback and ideas. :) thanks
KorynnO
Jan. 09, 2015
5. I might also suggest making your movement a bit faster, I gather that I am suppose to be a child, but there seems to be something awkward about "Excuse me, Mr.Slenderman while I slow walk towards/away from you". I feel like I should move faster in general or maybe be able to walk faster using a selected key. However this may be more of a personal preference. 6. So I collected all 10 posters... I saw Slender once in that time frame. 7. After I collected the posters nothing happened, I just ran around until I got bored and when I finally saw Slender I decided to hug him and ended the game. 8. When I hugged Mr.Slender his model fell over lol I suppose he isn't one for hugs.
I agree with the movement, however again i had play testers tell me it was to fast at one point so i slowed it down and they had said it was better considering your 10 and scared, but i do agree with you i could notch it up maybe 2 or 3 on the speed, lol because i don't want any akward moment in this game i want people to have that thrill of danger. Thanks
KorynnO
Jan. 09, 2015
Good start, A couple things I've noticed so far. 1. The mouse cursor makes it difficult to play the game, I've noticed that it's actually still in control of my web browser while I play which makes in game movement/interaction a challenge. 2. Mouse cursor disappears on start screen. 3. No roof! The blue abyss is nice however a "roof" on your house will make things come together a little more. Also I can see through the floor when I go downstairs. 4. I find having to hold down spacebar to have the mouse cursor appear just to collect things odd. If you want to keep it like that I would suggest making it so that while you hold spacebar, your cursor appears but you can still look/move around.
I agree with you on the cursor part, i had a bit of troubles trying to fix that and i think i might just take it out and centre the mouse in the gameplay screen. The blue part is the ceiling, i had a roof before that was triangular shape, and i had people play test it and they told me a ceiling would make it feel more "Homey" but now that i think about the roof would make it seem more unwanted for children to be there and more Slendy like. Thanks :)
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